After all i was happy with the grade that i got for the first draft. I did miss some stuff but more of all  was happy with my work. I have been working this my topic for a while and the amount of info's I had if I would have put it in my paper it would probably end up being a book. What I came to realize is my paper is very informative and like Ginger said I needed an argument, which I am working on but not having a great time working on it. Now here comes the worst part revising my paper, I never liked revising my paper or others paper but I guess no choice.